Random Dragon with Friend

yea I'm gonna have a lotta submissions with 'random' in the name till I get good enough to feel confident with drawing actual chars. so...yea. this time, it wasn't Teacher Dragon that helped me draw! no, it was who helped me! and, I tried shading for the first time.
I'm really happy with how this pic turned out, more than all my others so for this one..........I want critique.
but please don't be mean! keep in mind I'm still a beginner!
(I can't ACTUALLY hit request critique cuz I'm not a PM, but PLEASE, do it if you want just as a normal comment, and just say the starts and stuff.

Art (c) (me)
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